Archive for September 8th, 2014

September 8, 2014

Oh, the power of a comma

by Janie Jones

From my Advanced Writing for Science Majors class today:

Consider the following sentence giving careful thought to proper punctuation.

Woman without her man is nothing.

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Woman, without her man, is nothing.

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Woman, without her, man is nothing.

September 8, 2014

Making some changes

by Janie Jones

I’m still kicking.

As it is won’t, life is changing all around me.  I’m trying to make the best of it.